Shadow Knight

Kill me now, I actually liked Eragon. And uh, Paolini actually intentionally made it cliched. Or at least I read that somewhere on his site. I'm eagerly anticipating the next ...

Addicted Chapter 2 Skye woke with a jerk, covered in sweat. Kitty was leaning over him and dabbing his forehead with a cold rag, a distressed expression on her face. ...

Not bad. Like I said, I think you mostly need to work on how you word things and where you place punctuation. Sometimes I think you can't find a certain ...

SK, you couldn't find grammatical errors? :roll: I was swimming in them! Keyword: 'You' Meaning I, me, I could not find any, because to be honest I didn't really look... ...

Whoa... that was incredible. Now... grammatical errors all over the place. First of all, lack of apostrophes. eg. You have Alices, it should be Alice's. The dialogue seemed a bit ...

lol - your poetry has better grammar than you're normal posts ;). I only saw one grammar error: 'The world is at it's lowest.' It shouldn't be "it's", but rather ...

Pfft, you call this dramatic? :P Anyway, Nefer, Beauty is not a conventional thing. Beauty varies from person to person, each person thinks a different thing is beautiful. In this ...

I'm not sure if anyone has answered the 'eye-teeth' question, as I can't be bothered reading the rest of the posts right now, so... the eye-teeth, or the k9 teeth, ...

'I've never had too much trouble with math , except when we first started algebra last year, so I do a lot of it before school starts so I don ...

You're right, you can't tell this is sci-fi. It's great, one spelling error that I did pick up on, was blond, it is spelt blonde (or does that differ for ...

*starts a chant* WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! Seriously, to be able to write that well, when you are 12, I'm 13 and i can't write ...

Um, I laughed at the last stanza (it is stanza isn't it? Please tell me I'm not making an idiot of myself). Ok, it's good, lol i have to agree ...

Well because of how stupid Internet Explorer is (DIE INTERNET EXPLORER *Stabs IE with a rusty spoon* HA HA HA!) I had to use my initiative and copy paste the ...

LOVE IT EMMA! :lol: :lol: :lol: Especially the disturbing bits, come on Nate, we are teens after all! :P :P :P

Nice description of Donovan when he is dead. Another thing, you can't wipe blood off. This is a great story, i can't wait for chapter 3. ~~Shadow~Knight~~ :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: